Great art, but the writing could do with having been proof-read and edited by someone who speaks English as their first language.
alldarker wrote:Great art, but the writing could do with having been proof-read and edited by someone who speaks English as their first language.
Exactly what I was thinking. Artwork is briliant, but is lost on the bad pacing of the story and especially the terrible writing.
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